Hump Day Hook 7/24

Hump Day Hook is a weekly blog hop where writers are invited to hook readers with just a few paragraphs from a work in progress or published work. Visit their site by clicking on the button below for a list of other participating writers and share the love!  Today’s Hook, like all my snippets from July 1st straight on until the book gets published, comes from The Last Hour of Gann, picking up where last Sunday Sneak Peek left off and continuing on Saturday’s WeWriWa. Feel free to catch up and if you like what you read, don’t forget to leave a comment and tell me you want to enter my Gann Giveaway! One lucky winner will be drawn from the ol’ hat and win a free ecopy of my book!


“And we probably won’t be able to live together. Not in the same dorm room, maybe not even in the same complex.”

“I can’t be alone!”

“You won’t be alone, Nicci. You’ll be rooming with up to seven other women, they’ll just be strangers.”


“We’ll lose our jobs and have to work a state-job as partial payment for those dorms, where our salary cap will be half what it is now, so once we move into those dorms, we are never getting out.”


Yes, dammit!” Amber snapped. “These are the facts, Nicci! We can’t stay here and nothing we do can change that. This place is all over. Maybe if we had enough time, we could find another place we could afford on just what we’re making now, but you know goddamned well that we’d end up on a first-served list and we could be there for years! Where are we going to live in the meantime, huh?”

“You could get more time!” Nicci snatched at the lease, tearing it in her haste. “Did you even ask? There has to be a number that…that you could call and they’ll give us more time if they know we’re…on a list or…”


10 responses to “Hump Day Hook 7/24

  1. Poor NIcci. You can’t decide whether to give her a big, comforting hug or slap her up side of the face to knock some sense into her. I think she probably needs both. May I have an entry, please.

  2. Did you do this for all your books? I love the idea it’s so good for us fans! Please may I have another entry?

    • This is the first time, actually. I’ve only had the blog for a month or two. But it’s really great to get so much feedback and I’m already regretting not doing this much, much sooner.

      You are entered!

  3. This really is a pretty grim looking future for the sisters, I can see why the colonization propaganda makes that look like a better option than staying on Earth.

    May I have an entry please? Thank you.

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