Hump Day Hook 7/31

Hump Day Hook is a weekly blog hop where writers are invited to hook readers with just a few paragraphs from a work in progress or published work. Visit their site by clicking on the button below for a list of other participating writers and share the love!


Welp, this is the last snippet-post of July and as we can all see by looking at my Work In Progress bar, I’m not ready to go live on the book yet. So it looks like the Gann Giveaway will continue into August! (pause for cheers) To further motivate me to finish the book before September, an additional winner will be drawn when the time to publish is nigh upon me! (pause for slightly louder cheers) To recap, all of my snippets for Hump Day Hook, Sneak Peek Sundays and WeWriWa will be taken from The Last Hour of Gann, beginning with the first word on the first page way back on July the 1st, and picking up right where the previous snippet leaves off. Each time I make a post, you may enter to win a free ecopy of The Last Hour of Gann when it is published. Just remember that all my books contain graphic violence and strong sexual content, so you must explicitly tell me so each and every time you enter.

Enough about that. On with the scene in the Bierce family kitchen…

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“—if you can’t even admit you’ll be a whore?”

“I can do it,” whispered Nicci, but she wouldn’t look at Amber.

“Maybe you could, but you couldn’t do it here, and you had better be sure that’s the way you want to go because they don’t let you stop anymore once you start. You’ll have to get the barcode and you’ll be subject to scans at any time. They’ll cancel your insurance—look at me, Nicci—and garnish your wages to pay for the state insurance and all your monthly tests, plus the initial registration and the operation where they spay you, and you know it took Mama five years to pay all that off. And in the meantime, where will you be living? Because you still won’t be able to pay the new lease on a state-paid whore’s salary and this place will still be just as gone.”

“Stop it!” Nicci shouted. “Stop bullying me! I’m not leaving!”

Amber pressed her lips together and folded her hands. She told herself she wasn’t a bully. “What are you going to do, Nicci? Where are you going to go?”

“Shut up!” Nicci beat her palms on the table loud enough that old Mrs. Simon in the next apartment banged her cane on the wall. “I’m not leaving! You can’t make me leave, Amber! You can’t make me leave the planet!”

“I’m not making you do anything,” said Amber, knowing damned well it was a lie. “I’m just telling you that I’m going, with or without you.”

Nicci stared, her mouth working in silent horror.

“There is no other place for us to go,” said Amber.

And she waited, but Nicci still couldn’t find anything to say, so she picked up the brochure and started to flip through it.


15 responses to “Hump Day Hook 7/31

  1. Who was it who said, “There are none so blind as those who will not see” ? This may apply to Nicci in this case, poor thing. May I have an entry, please?

  2. Thank you for the hook. Will The Hour of Gaan be a long book (roughly number of pages?) I like the length of your books. Please enter me. Thank you.

    • Boy, will it be a long book. When I was first mulling over the idea, I made the hilariously unprophetic comment to my sister that this would be the shortest book I ever wrote because there just didn’t seem to be as much story to it as, say, Cottonwood. Result? Cottonwood is the shortest novel I’ve ever written and The Last Hour of Gann is the longest. As of this moment, it is 714 formatted pages. And that’s after I’ve trimmed out a number of scenes my betas are really pushing me to put back in.

      I’m glad you like long books. So do I, which is probably why I resist the trend towards ‘booklings’ and write them. Another entry for CGirl!

  3. I too love that your books do not finish after a few chapters! The snippets just make me more impatient for the book to be finished. Good luck with the editing, which I have to say is usually really, really good. Please may I have another entry…

    • My editing has gotten much better since I started the beta read-alouds. Since I wrote it, my eye has a tendency to just sort of glide over errors without seeing them, at least until they’re published, when they are the very first things I see…

      Another entry for Pat!

  4. Hey I never noticed your progress bar before, neat! Also yay more chances to win! Speaking of, may I have an entry please?

  5. I like that your books are long. It’s so satisfying to know that I’m going to be able to enjoy the book for a while.

  6. I have read ALL your books. You are one of my “purchase without a sample” authors! :). I would love to win a copy of your next book, The Last Hour of Gann.

  7. I remember this from the excerpt at the end of Cottonwood. I remember reading this scene and thinking… Wow, one bears the power found in love and one the power of fear. Which is stronger and which will fold under pressure?

    I am a week late on reading but would be grateful for another entry?

  8. Everyone responding is so nice. Is it too much that I want the sex, violence & to be transported? LOL! Of course, I am like-minded in that I would like an entry (or an ARC?) 😉

    • I don’t think it will ever be possible for me to write a book without the sex and violence. That’s just how I roll. But you don’t get an entry because you’re already on my list of free copies! What would you do with two of them?

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