Weekend Writer Warrior 9/21

The Weekend Writing Warriors blog hop is a weekly event in which writers are invited to share eight sentences from one of their works for other writers, readers and random bloggers to read, critique and comment on. Visit their site by clicking on the button below for a list of other participating writers and share the love!



All spoken as heavy as the eternally overcast skies. He found himself wishing she would look at him, as wildly inappropriate as that would be, to show him her naked eyes and let him see some glimmer of a future in them.

But the burning arm beckoned. A Sheulek answered to God above his brothers, his teachers, even his own father. He could not spurn Him to linger with this woman. He could be of no comfort to her.

He touched her again, actually gripping her shoulder this time in a more direct farewell than he had given anyone else in Xi’Xheoth, but she cringed beneath his hand, understandably confused and dismayed by this intimacy. He left her, shutting the door behind him to give the first of her soft, broken tears some privacy.

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5 responses to “Weekend Writer Warrior 9/21

  1. I’m torn between reading the teasers and putting them aside until I can start to read the book. Well, we all stop to gander at a car accident, I guess I’ll do the same here. Hope you are having a great vacation!

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