Weekend Writer Warrior 9/28

The Weekend Writing Warriors blog hop is a weekly event in which writers are invited to share eight sentences from one of their works for other writers, readers and random bloggers to read, critique and comment on. Visit their site by clicking on the button below for a list of other participating writers and share the love!



The abbot began to pray as Meoraq made himself ready. Since it was the custom for the prayers to continue for so long as the honored visitor was there to hear them, he did it quickly and moved on before the elderly man’s voice could tire.

Beyond the temple gates, the city moved and breathed. At this hour, on any other night, the inner passageways of the city would have been empty, save for the watchmen on their patrols and the beacons with their lumbering carts, measuring out dippers of oil to keep the lamps lit.

Now the walkways were choked with people and most of the food-stalls in sight were opened as merchants took advantage of the crowds. Looking around at all this activity, anyone would think it was full day outside.

A shifting beside him. The temple had sent for watchmen to escort him out of the city and they waited nervously for his acknowledgement, looking at him with eyes that said they knew as well as he did for whom the message in the sky had been written.


6 responses to “Weekend Writer Warrior 9/28

  1. I’ve finished, loved it and am thinking of starting again! I left a review on Amazon (five stars of course!) but it’s really hard to find the book if you don’t know the title and even searching under R. Lee Smith does not offer the book as a first option. I think the more reviews it gets the more it will come up in general searches. I for one would like to see this author do well as the books are so good.

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