Weekend Warrior Writers 1/11/14

The Weekend Writing Warriors blog hop is a weekly event in which writers are invited to share eight sentences from one of their works for other writers, readers and random bloggers to read, critique and comment on. Visit their site by clicking on the button below for a list of other participating writers and share the love! Today’s 8 comes from Pool, wherein I offer up a little more history on the mountain where Norah and her friends are staying.


            The older girl studied her intently, but apparently found no offense, no matter how hard she looked for it. She didn’t thaw any, but she did unlock just a little. “It’s not the only bad place in those mountains, that’s all I’m saying,” she said. “White people keep going up there and they keep disappearing. Nobody finds their bones in five years or even fifty, you know? When they disappear up there, they disappear for good. And no one knows what’s doing it. Tireksorpok, yeah? It’s all unseen.”

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Come back for tomorrow’s Sneak Peek Sunday to read more from this scene!


11 responses to “Weekend Warrior Writers 1/11/14

  1. So of course they go there. Yep. That sounds about right. Bad, scary place of mystery ahead. Dire warnings. So they go right ahead. Nice excerpt.


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