The Weekend Writing Warriors blog hop is a weekly event in which writers are invited to share eight sentences from one of their works for other writers, readers and random bloggers to read, critique and comment on. Visit their site by clicking on the button below for a list of other participating writers and share the love! Today’s 8 comes from Pool and finally concludes that scene that started way back in the first week of January, which means I have to do something different, starting tomorrow. Whatever will it be…?
“Just thought I’d mention it,” John called casually, still herding Norah back to the car. “In case you all think it might be fun to dress up in your mom’s sheets and play ghost tonight.”
“John!” she gasped, appalled.
“Ukpatiga kungiuk,” the older sister spat, disgusted. She took her little sister’s hand and headed back up the road. “You’re going to wish they were only ghosts up there. You’re all going to die. And no one will ever find anything but your chewed-up bones.”